English rewording

I’m stumbling through the beginning and am thinking it might be a bit off-putting for folks. words that are semi synonymous are used but given context have a clunky or unused quality. Are there any plans for a “fluently English” story line.

I’m going to endeavor the write the text I come across down and make any changes I think will improve flow or understand-ability. Some of it’s tricky, I’m not entirely sure what the original author was getting at on some of it

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